Units × Hyatt Centric

Talent edits · v9 · 25 Sep · tap a video to play (sound on)

What changed in v9

C-01 “At Units”. The laugh and the pause are gone. I used her clean first “At Units” and let the “s” finish.
A-03. No pause after “it just launched”.
B-02 first half tighter. “It’s what sits behind it” 22% quicker, the rest 10%. Second half untouched.
A-06. She’s talking 0.1 s in (was 0.5 s). The rest is exactly as you approved.
A-02 grade. Highlights and overall exposure down about ⅓ stop, so windows and ceiling are no longer near-white.

Your notes

C-01The walk-through
0:34

“…equal instalments. At Units, we’d rather give you the full picture…” with no laugh and no gap. Every spot you flagged before was re-checked on this file.

A-03Phase 2
0:11

“It just launched. Same brand…” with no gap

B-02Not every name is the same
0:11

First half quicker, second half untouched

A-06Seven minutes
0:11

Starts talking straight away

A-02From 0% down
0:12

New grade, talking untouched. Still: left v8, right v9.

A-02 grade, v8 left, v9 right

Content: my take

C-02Why managed at all
0:21

Makes sense up to “the answer gets easier”. Then “It’s the same question to ask whoever sells it to you” jumps from the building to Units without saying so, and “Worth the difference?” has nothing to point at. The concierge/housekeeping b-roll carries the first half. For the Units line, add a card (“Who’s there after you sign?”) or cut the line.

B-03Not just a unit
0:12

You’re right, it’s thin. It’s all claims with nothing to see, and “That was a quick look” points at a look we never show. With the hotel, pool and dining b-roll over the middle it becomes a mini-tour and the ending lands. Without footage, I’d drop it.

Approved · untouched

D-03Who looks after it
0:11

Your “good”, no changes

A-07200 feddans
0:08

No changes

A-08One bed to seven
0:10

No changes